savoirefaire's BLOG

{Wednesday, September 07, 2005 . }

If my heart was made of stone,

How would it feel?

Would it feel pity or pain?

Or would it have only the

Grainy grooves

Of quartz and tourmaline.

I never want to be

A heart on a stool;

But mostly would not want to be

The heart of a fool.

Okay that was an inspired piece after years of never having written so do spare me the criticism but if you are being constructive, drop me a line :P

But yeah, amazing what pain can do to your brain when it has to come up with such ditties. Ehehehe.

savoirefaire blogged at 12:24 AM

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Comments:

Omg..Sandhya.. wats this? Impressive! Waah Kavi Tiwari :)

# posted by

utkarsh : Sun Sep 11, 01:15:00 PM GMT+8

i liked it. can't say i can offer much in terms of constructive criticism as poetry never really was my thing but i liked the way it felt. kinda touched my soul a little bit.

hope the pain that inspired this has eased up a little.

luv,
faz

# posted by

Anonymous : Sat Sep 17, 01:22:00 AM GMT+8